I think identity theft is shit. The amount of lasses that are victims of identity theft is ridiculous, in the last five years 27 million people have been a victim of identity theft and it will just get worse. If I was a victim of identity theft I wouldn’t know what to do and would feel crap. I would never want this to happen to me so I am careful when I go on the internet as there are some dicks that think it is alright.
In this paragraph I have used first person narrative with mild taboo, which gives the reader a personal and more emotional feeling when they are reading through as they know that it has happened to someone else.
Identity theft can affect people in many different ways. People believe that identity theft won’t happen to them, but it can. The amount of people that use the internet daily, it only takes one website for it all to go wrong.
In the paragraph above I have used the third person which makes it more formal and reliable. It is also very descriptive.
You fucking bastard. Who do you think you are stealing my daughter’s identity? I can’t believe someone would actually do this. This could happen to your cunt of a daughter if you don’t keep her ‘safe’.
I have used strong taboo in this paragraph as well as the second person which involves the reader. It would be inappropriate to show this to any audience because of this taboo and it also comes across very aggressive.
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